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Emma's Story

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Honestly, I didn't bother going past the first section, as it was terrible in every way.

First off, item placements don't make any sense, theres no narrative that dictates anything for that matter.

Even the first note you pick up is just rushed nonsense, instead of using gameplay to show a narrative; you used a note with the most one-dimensional character who just so happens to know everything about this orb of power? Why? And ending it with 'Your lover' are you serious? Who in their right mind does that? Why didn't you use the letter to portray this?

Infact, all notes on this floor followed this pattern, one-dimensional jargon.

At first I thought it was just a poor start, but what gives you a 1 is that manniquin section. Are you actually serious? The first 'scare' in the game and you use THE most tired cliche in the horror genre? If thats how you want to grip the players, then consider me lost, theres way more original mods out there.

And this is aside from the fact that you beg for votes in exchange for future content. You have bad skills and bad practises.