Comments - chunkyhobbit

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Pros:
- Took initiative in setting the story during the 21st century

- Winged creature with split skull was terrifying, and was executed perfectly

- Some dry humor

Cons:
- Plot was dense and weak

- level design was cramped and ugly

- puzzles were simple and copied

- The English was the poorest I've ever read

- the voice acting was unbearable

- the atmosphere was tame

- It cut corners in most level design (namely forest and drainage) -- hell, I could see the BOTTOM of an area that I shouldn't be able to see

- puzzles that solved themselves (keys that were supposed to be "hidden" had their location written on a note not so far away)

- involved few monster encounters

- pacing was absolutely horrid, might I add, as none of the events lead up to a scare, they only were anticipated upon grabbing an item

- story was nonsensical and an enormous cliche, mostly ripping from the original game without any secondary creative thought involved

- Basement area was small and cramped, and the rods took me less than two minutes to find.

Overall, this custom story was one of the highest voted that I have played that was absolute crap (IMO). It seemed to have been created by someone who was eager to release the story without actually finishing it and polishing it. I would say that I look forward to more (better) custom stories of yours, but I would not be truthful. Please consider working with others when doing such a project, as their creative insight may help you more than you can help yourself.