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Phenixtri
Phenixtri

wow these are good 0.0 The proportions on the bodies are all good too. The faces are good too but could use a little more work since they look a little chibi like to me but that's a matter preference. My only problem is that the guns look too flat & it ruins the 3D impression of the pic it self. To me the guns look half assed & or cartoon like while the characters them selves look rather professional. Shading is also top notch & other minor details like the belts & buttons are also very good.

All in all I give it an 8-10 since the guns poor quality ruins the rest of the picture. Seriously fix the flat guns, add a simple yet captivating background, & this would make great cover art for your own manga. I hope you would consider making a short manga of these 2 as I would be rather interested in reading it :)

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EoCORE Author
EoCORE

now this i called criticism and suggestions
yea i always interested in reading criticism and suggestions
that make my work better

*ok i get the gun and background
btw thx for criticism and suggestions

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Phenixtri
Phenixtri

np best of luck on your future projects m8 :)

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XenoAisam
XenoAisam

you could take many reference for your colour scheme.. for this i suggest use Black Rock shooter CG picture.. any you think is good, and take it as sample colour..

to make the picture looks more good, try to use 3 colour variant such one for original colour, one for shade and one for lighting such my Naluri here: Moddb.com

ok?

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EoCORE Author
EoCORE

ahahaha OK thx xeno
save your pic

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bloodstalker
bloodstalker

ok this is very good but u can fix a couple of things :
first thing is with their eyes and facial expressions.
the second thing is the left gal's posture seems unnatural,her stomach is too much in the front.
all in all a great job.

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well this is my oc
Himori Arazaki *left have a long hair
and Kimori Arazaki *right yea erm... short hair
~~took 3 hour for make this one
may be this the smoothest drawing i ever made
hope you like it ^^

I beg to ask for comment, criticism and suggestions for my work

my deviantART: Ikkou-san.deviantart.com

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