A simple yet ambitious plan, to terraform planet Diversitas. About 1.25 trillion dollars were invested into this project, ships were built, colonizers were trained, scientists were hired; And it all failed. On the second year following the route to Diversitas, one of the main nuclear engines of the mother ship "Infinitum" exploded, as far as you know you are the only survivor. Alone in space, no communication, no people.
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Again, you have the lower case "i" characters, you should add a sentence break at "your heart", it should be beg "your" pardon, it should be "it's" not like I had a choice and "it's" not like there was another way, and I would change the final sentence to be "But I must admit that it feels good to finally give up on this miserable thing we call life."
I know your group are based in Nicaragua and most of these a fully understandable in that context, but if you would like any help getting your stuff proofread I would be more than happy to help if I can.