what do you think of my work??????? Thread

I am a level designer for the UDK

what do y'all think of my work? ( please give as much constructive criticism, and of course nice comments if you have um.)

thank you and just go through the images, and i start you off from most current work to oldest work.

here is my previous work:
Moddb.com

to leave feedback just comment on the pic

again,thank you all for your time

any questions please ask.

pretty good you need to light up a bit more simulate bounce light there slightly to dark.

Yep you need some work on lighting the levels (particly first few ones). Another thing i would say is in the house/garden the grass is very repetitive. Try to make it more random.

thank you for the advice, lighting is particularly hard for me. any tut on lighting?

and keep the criticism coming everyone

Most of your work looks very well designed, I suppose. The light seemed like it could have been incorporated a bit better, but nonetheless, keep at it, I see much talent.

thank you Robotyphoon for advice and compliment. i am working on lighting now

Lighting is definetly something you need to work on.
Also, some of the clipping (meshes intersecting) is quite ugly. I know that it's sometimes impossible to avoid bad clipping when doing level design - but a good level designer tries to hide the faults behind other assets (can be anything from foilage, to garbage, rocks, etc).

Edited by: Nightshade

Thank you nightshade I will try to work on hiding the intersections better:) everyones advice is great thank you all ,very much. I am using iphone

did you make the props for the house? looks better than the others

yes id did i am practicing how to 3d model now using 3dmax, on my bros pc. thanks for the feedback insane nice talk to you again

Same except using Maya.
Max started to give me problems -.-

Maya seems better from my experiences

keep it up

Thanks