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ShadowDragon
ShadowDragon ShadowLore Co-Leader & Modeler
Mar 16 2004 Anchor

I started on a female elf model this morning. It currently has about 6 hours of work put in to it.
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Tell me what you guys think :)

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Mar 16 2004 Anchor

lol the breasts are flat ;) jk nice model

Mar 16 2004 Anchor

needs alot of work

Mar 16 2004 Anchor

her face doesn't quite seem i could be wrong though.

ShadowDragon
ShadowDragon ShadowLore Co-Leader & Modeler
Mar 16 2004 Anchor

Ok I've done a bit more on her. Added hands, along with rest of her arms. Fixed up her breast, and face a little.
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- Edited By shadowdragon On Tue 16th, Mar 2004 @ 10:17:54pm

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krayzie
krayzie Max Abuser
Mar 16 2004 Anchor
  • Breasts too low
  • The thing between eyes should pop in not out
  • Ears, well i dont really know what an elfs ears should look like
  • Add some sideburns, and pull the hair more down on the sides
  • Face needs much work
  • Great model though!! It really reflects all of the time and effort put into it, very nice job!

- Edited By KrAyZiE On Tue 16th, Mar 2004 @ 10:51:22pm

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PsychoFarmer
PsychoFarmer modDB King
Mar 16 2004 Anchor

the head almost seems like its too tall to me... if the head is supposed to be narrow, make the cheekbones a bit higher and more defined

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a_llama
a_llama Teh moddb llama
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

Nice model, but i agree with eveything krAyZiE pointed out, and it doesn't look particularly elvish at the moment...

TwinBeast
TwinBeast Full Metal Bionic Witch
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

I think the breasts were better on the first picture. So make 'em bigger. You could make the ear top things longer. Face needs some more work on it. Other than that, cool model.

PsychoFarmer
PsychoFarmer modDB King
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

im not sure the area around the nose should be bulging outwards either

*notice: i think its a cool model anywho*

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ShadowDragon
ShadowDragon ShadowLore Co-Leader & Modeler
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

Ok I've adjusted the head, breast, and neck. And added some simple materials. Hope you like it :D
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leilei
leilei The person who doesn't like anything
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

Yeah something wrong with the breasts. It doesn't span the torso, like she's got a big manly chest spanning underneath em.

a_llama
a_llama Teh moddb llama
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

The breasts are a bit "squished in the middle", move them outwards and make em a little wider maybe?

leilei
leilei The person who doesn't like anything
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

Yeah that's what i mean :D

Just because she's an elf doesn't mean she should have the tiniest of breastesses...

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PsychoFarmer
PsychoFarmer modDB King
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

give her some breasteses man!!

the nose looks a bunch better though

things i see to work on: the foreheads needs to be flatter, most people dont have a ridge in the middle of their foreheads, and the cheekbones need to be a bit more defined (or at least in my image of an elf they should be)

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chis
chis Old man.
Mar 17 2004 Anchor

She looks scary :(

/me runs behind PF

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