Jayson Bay is a former scientist working at a Secret Facility Named "Black Mesa" But on May 16th of 2000, Everything Changed..
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Jayson Bay is a former scientist working at a Secret Facility Named "Black Mesa" But on May 16th of 2000, Everything Changed..
Not bad, here are some suggestions:
- The ceiling looks very empty while visible like that, either make the section darker to hide it or give the ceiling more details.
- The light has to come from natural light sources, add some near the train track, maybe to the walls.
- Why are the see through grate textures duplicated like that? Are there two brushes there instead of one? Use a single brush and add { textures only to the visible sides. Also fix the misaligned textures on grey rails.
- The benches and trashcans are overused, I'd get rid of the ones on the train walkway. Keep the walkway clear for passenger and add small lights as details instead.
- Cut the corners on the striped train-gate properly to avoid overlapping or use STRIPES2 texture instead and reset texture surface properties. The shadowy parts of the one you're using right now is messing with the seamlessness.
Thanks for the Reply! just fixed it now :)