You play as Mark. He is in his apartment when a monster captures and brings him to a castle. To escape, he must complete trials. Will he succeed or will he be kept prisoner in the castle forever?

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CheesyDeveloper says

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Positives:

- You know how to use custom stuff

Negatives:

- Short, super lame story
- Based on a youtuber
- Boring and rushed level design
- No challange
- Author does apparently not know how to bug test his own story

Conclusion:

It's based on a youtuber. Do you need more information than that?

I took me around 15 minutes to reach the end. 20 minutes if you count that time I got stuck in the first Minecraft map and had no other option but to restart the story. Instead of walking down to the lava, I decided to randomly jump around which was enough to bug the story out completely.

The first key description is so long it's not even visible.

You must use the knife at the right angle on the prisoner. And funny part is, he didn't even die when I stabbed him.

I died by the suitor at the end. Death hint: "Mark died by lava".

This guy's humour is terrible, but the reasons why I only rate it 2/10 is because there is absoutely no point with it. Just some random, rushed maps with no challange or creativity in them at all. You know how to use custom items, but that is the only positive thing I can say about this story.

Next time, don't make a story for a youtuber because they are never appreciated. Second of all, don't rush with them (every map is around 2-3 mintues long each), add more details and most importantly, make a good story line.

2/10 - Really bad

just stop

Twas actually a pretty cool custom story, not amazing, but it was pretty unique. So Daniel (Mark) has to go through several trails of his past, they could've been a bit longer imo, but there was nothing inherently bad with them, I quite enjoyed it. Pretty good story overall, it's worth a try.

Good:

- Not too long
- Had some pretty good scares
- It's about Markiplier ^_^
- Never had any bugs

Bad:

- Could be a little bit more scary
- So much closed doors D:

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Humeba says

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Uh, what the hell did I just try to play? Whatever it was it crashed in the minecraft lava pit area.

1 word :
Terrible!
Just not fun at all, only want to have Mark play hos mod...

i love mark and if you need a video to showcase im planning on doing a lp of this

This was funny :))

ok

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zys says