People say that the universe is infinite… say that it’s impossible to realize its size. But sometimes even the infinity has a place…a source of all wishes…and when such a source appears…then even the infinity becomes cramped. DUNE!
"Motivation" (Eng)
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this one was created spontaneously =)
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Good, this again was very well built, I haven’t seen something this well built from an amateur in long time and I actually really like the music. It fits in well with the Dune them, particularly with some of the darker motives of Dune. No insult intended, but is it synthesized, or did you actually perform?
My only complaints are as such:
1) The voice over. The person speaking didn't take enough pauses, like at the end of his speech where he said ‘Dune’; he should of left a large dramatic pause before. But he didn't. Actually I found the voice to be the worst part, his voice was far too harsh, and someone with a more philosophical voice should have spoken, potentially a female.
2) This is only really a minor complaint (note: MINOR) but I think some of the on-screen text could do with some improvement. It didn't quite seem to fit somehow, and it didn't make it look professional.
3) Only half a film. I sure hope you don't make a habit of this, twice now you've only produced half a film and then just had the other half with some text and some music continuation. I can understand (and agree with) perhaps the past 10 seconds, maximum. But half a film is ridiculous.
Sorry to have so many complaints, but films are hard to get right and I have singled out pretty much all he problems above, so well done!
"3" - oh, sorry
The end of film is 01:45
It just some problem with this video and moddb.com, I will try to to decide this problem
P.S.: The music is "Dreamtale - The Dawn"
what program are you using? Most likely the song extends after the video finishes, and so your program automaticaly copies the last frame continuously.
It is unlikely it is modDB's fault, unless they have set a minimal upload length, and so they automaticaly copy the last frame continuously, but that wouldn't solve the music being repeated.
Most likely, someone exported it incorectly and/or didn't check it through before hand
my complaints:
-the narrator's voice is silent, maybe too silent.
-i can sense some german accent and i can't understand a few parts of what he is narrating.
but all in all the video is great!! it kinda reminds me of the anime Gun x Sword.
"i can't understand a few parts of what he is narrating."
[-People say that the universe is infinite… say that it’s impossible to realize its size. But sometimes even the infinity has a place…a source of all wishes…and when such a source appears…then even the infinity becomes cramped. DUNE!-]
"i can sense some german accent"
=) oh no, this is Ukrainian accent, it was my voice, after this record my voice three days was hoarse ^^
the problem is my English is not very well so sorry
it's ukrainian? sorry i thought it was german. your story is nice. if you are planning to remake it here are some tips:
-hire someone over the net to narrate it in english for you (if you'd let me i can lend a hand).
-and while the video is playing on the part about the people, instead of typing the words, you should narrate it instead.
ok, thx, maybe in our next video we will do something like that
so, can we address to you for the help in that case?
sure, why not, i'm happy to help.
Hells Yes.