Hi, this is my first custom story I uploaded, my English isn't the best so there may be grammar problems.
Your name is Jack and your grandpa's name is Dereck. Once you get a message from your grandpa. Wich note and diary part can you trust?
This cs is focusing on puzzles.
Features:
-Puzzles(non-inventory puzzles too)
-Few scares
-A story
-Expansions
-Needs Amnesia:Justine to play
Please report bugs you've found to butyi@gmail.hu
If you want to play with the Finnish version, go here:Moddb.com
Install:Put "Grandpa's mansion" folder to your "custom_stories" folder, and put "entities" folder can be found inside "Grandpa's mansion" to your entities in Amnesia root folder.
I really don't want to, but I have to announce it, the last update is coming, the patch 1.2 and some extra shit.This is my first custom story and it has a very good rating and I've learnt a lot from your feedback.
I really never thought I can make this far, if this isn't that far.
I never thought someone will make a video about it, but Markusmama did, I never thought it's community rating will reach the 5, but it's 7.
So my first custom story was full of good things for me, so it's hard for me, but I have to stop making expansion for it.Because I planned another, but I had to realize I can't make forever expansion for this cs.
Thank you guys for the feedback, the supporting.Special thanks to Mudbil for his awesome Amnesia tutorials, and Kaernk for a lot's of help.
Ps:I was shocked when I saw someday it was one of the most popular amnesia mods on moddb:)
Release date is set to 1 March, because I'am out of things I have to do on the map and I need the feedback
I'am done with the story.Only a few things are left to do. I wish you'll like the cs, expecially because htis is my first one.
Finally, I have again my inspiration.I dunno how, but I got it back. Finally. I dunno what to write here...
Перевод на русский выполнен через yandex\google translate.Установка внутри
This is the expansion for Amnesia:Grandpa's mansion and patch 1.1
I can't speak German so I can't put German description here:S
This is the released version of the cs:Grandpa's mansion. There may be some bugs, but not game breaking bugs (I wish). The story is not longer than 30...
This is the demo of Amnesia:Grandpa's mansion.It contains the first two maps and a bonus outside map. Note:There is no credits.If you clock on the last...
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Hmmm seeing as it's your first custom story I won't vote beecause it'd be rather poor rating(I could give you 4 at most) I can see you have some talent but you're wasting it! There are a few troll moments in your custom story. I'll give you 2 examples that disgusted me : The fleshy wall that you're supposed to 'destroy'? It turned out you're simply supposed to click on it and there you go you just pass through it?.. That's gotta be pure trolling instead of a bug (smh) The 2nd thing that was outrageous was the Brute in the Servant's Room. Why did you make it like this? I'm just beyond words.. What exactly did you try to do here?.. Prove players that 'Monsters hurt, you know?'.. Really?.. Oh. my. god. We've played enough Amnesia to know that already. So.. Why are you killing the player without giving them the option to escape??.. If you've played enough custom stories you'd know that this is completely unacceptable. Such moments literally drive me crazy seeing as they're completely pointless and unnecessary, mmkay? Making the player collapse and get killed instantly is NOT making things challenging* (sigh) I'm sorry if I sound rude but I'm just trying to tell you to avoid making moments like these when you work on your next custom story. Have a nice day and good luck with your future projects :)
It's a kinda late to reply, I don't really check this mod oftern because I'am working on a bigger project right now.So:
I didn't meant to troll anybody.The goo "trolling" is an unfixed bug that I was too lazy to fix.I don't know which part is the other one you are talking about.And yeah, you can just rate it as you please:)Any feedback is good if it's constructive.
i should say it wasn't so bad for a first custom story. you have some creative ideas, used some custom entities and so on. still i didn't like the mapping in some places, the water reflections in the sanctum with the blue fog were awful, please do not use an effect like this next time. the story wasn't really well written, you should have come up with something more unique and interesting. you hid some things really bad, i had to search for several minutes for each item, it was a bit frustrating. all in all i'll give it a 6/10, it worths a try, and making it to the end. good start, make more ^.^
I just took a common story and made a twist on it.Yeah, it's very simple, but I was thinking about the story for like a month:/
gather some inspiration from horror novels or movies, if you don't have any ideas, that will help you quite much :)
Here is my review so far.
I can NOT continue in the cellar.
I heared a click sound after the 2 buttons..
NOTHING happend i guess.. the gate door also still stuck..
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Here is some things you need to fix.
1 Paintings are ALL loose from the wall
2 Be sure all skyboxes are BLACK when you are ONLY inside a house etc..
3 SOme ceiling glitches and wall glitches
4 Check some pointlights.. look weird. { color them more brown and bigger.
5 Check the start positions. they are all 1 grid too high and some are pointing the wrong direction.
6 Make some quests and or notes about what to do \ search.
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Overall i lke it.
It''s not so detailed but you can do that in any update.
The scripts are okay and you didnt do like jumpscares. big + for that.
Hope i can finish it. only need to know what to do.
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6.5\10 now.
After pressing the buttons a key spawn on the edge of the window.
Dude this is a cool mod btw
Thanks, I tried really hard to make this one as good as possible, if this is my first cs:)
Also one of my attribute is I can waste more time on details than I plan:D
how does that make anye sense?
With all respect but.. that's not really realistic...
Anyway. do you agree with what i wrote or you will ignore it?
Sure, I'll fix them, soon in a patch:)
Probably I just remove the buttons and let the key to be there since start.