...forgive me if I am a bit blunt, but I have some critique:
It sounds like you need to clear your throat a little
At two points in the video, you seem to start to get into something, then dart away.
And while I realize this is my first time watching -- it seems like you're just really -stating- all the things that happened, rather than actually give depth on the events. It seems a bit more like the update service ModDB has, but with a voice and a little more characterization.
Once again -- I have nothing against this broadcast, I'm just letting you know the things I saw/heard that I thought might need improvement.
Your right. I am only stating the mod news - highlighting the most important if you will. However - I'm an amateur. So the things you mentioned (my voice and the darting away) could be you, or me. But hopefully people see the updates. And as a matter of fact - I was at the very beginning of getting a cold while recording this audio - i have a cold now. Thanks for the critique!
Jurassic Life seems nice.
...forgive me if I am a bit blunt, but I have some critique:
It sounds like you need to clear your throat a little
At two points in the video, you seem to start to get into something, then dart away.
And while I realize this is my first time watching -- it seems like you're just really -stating- all the things that happened, rather than actually give depth on the events. It seems a bit more like the update service ModDB has, but with a voice and a little more characterization.
Once again -- I have nothing against this broadcast, I'm just letting you know the things I saw/heard that I thought might need improvement.
Your right. I am only stating the mod news - highlighting the most important if you will. However - I'm an amateur. So the things you mentioned (my voice and the darting away) could be you, or me. But hopefully people see the updates. And as a matter of fact - I was at the very beginning of getting a cold while recording this audio - i have a cold now. Thanks for the critique!
Also -- I have to ask. Is the name based upon a change from Game Informer? The logo even sort of reminds me of their logo.