To anyone who is reading this or watching, I hit a snag that had forced a set-back that I wasn't entirely aware of. I asked some of my friends, who are those which I based many of the primary Characters on, about the Earth military and it's name. Because of this, I have to resort to going back and re-writting various parts to fit the change. Hope to complete it soon.
Redigned Story
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