Alright. Don't know if I've played the actual FULL version or if I played just the 'demo' (shall have to download the full version soon to find that out), but so far. This was a damn fine story.
It all looks really good and refined, both the story and the surroundings. Only remark I have... would be the grammar. It'd be really nice if you'd check your grammar one last time before releasing your story. Might seem like a small detail to you, but it really takes away part of the atmosphere in thruthfulness.
Overall, though, I'd give you an 8 (you see? Lost 2 points just because of the grammar alone) ;)
Nice work.
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