Comments - LustinForBlood

I really loved your CS. It was funny, scary at points & had a relatively good story albeit simple.

The descriptions of some of the items had me laughing & the note from the Killer too.

The level design was good as well, wasn't too complicated & I personally didn't see anything wrong with textures & such.

And if I recall correctly I didn't see any spelling mistakes in the descriptions or notes. That may seem like a trivial thing to point out but it makes a lot of difference, to me, when the CS is fantastically done but then you read notes & it's hard for you to read.

I really wish it was longer but that doesn't detract from the fact that this CS was awesome.

I look forward to future content from you. :)

I just played your CS and I thought it was pretty good.

There was some issues with spelling but I am going to assume English may not be your first language(?) & that maybe why there was some spelling issues. If you have a decent grasp of the language run your future CS's quickly in Microsoft Word or something so you can quickly correct some words/sentences or, you can get someone to do a kind of proof-reading of your script(s). It may add extra time to the making of your CS's but it will also improve it, especially if it is like this CS in which some of your CS was done through the way of notes & descriptions of items.

Speaking of the notes: I liked that you gave a bit of an insight into Alma's character through the use of notes. It made me feel a bit more "connected" to the character.

The story was good & easy to follow/understand. I really liked the adding of the character "Soul Protector". The only issue I have with Soul Protector is that many people wouldn't expect a demonic being to be so caring & nice. Kind of goes against what we traditionally think when we hear that a "demon" is in a story. However, that braking of the mold is a good thing. It challenges what we expect when we hear of a demonic being in a story/game.

Overall I thought your CS was great. The only real issue I had was that of spelling but as I said; I can't give you a hard time for it if it isn't your native language.

I will keep an eye out for more of your stuff in the future. :)