Comments - Faustian69

This was a great first time CS. The level design was simple and straight forward. There was very little in the way of scares but the general atmosphere was chilling.

That being said, there was one glaring flaw; the notes throughout were riddled with some of the most gratuitous grammatical errors I've ever seen in a CS. The overabundance of misplaced modifiers, unnecessary adjectives and misspellings, was lending itself to hilarity than to immersion. When reading them aloud, I ended up laughing so often that it extinguished the general dread that was built up during the interludes from note to note.

Regardless of the atrocious butchering of the language, this was a great first CS, and I look forward to seeing what you produce in the future.