Then the Slenderman. Why the fvck is the Slenderman there? You had this character, 'Dolly', as I labeled him, which I was wanting to know more about it! A backstory, for all we know, it's EVILLLL!!!!!! But then you throw a giant Slenderman, and you just removed every bit of originality you had. And the drawn levels were taken straight from freaking Cry of Fear and Afraid of Monsters, for Christ's sake! Cry of Fear was cool because it was delving into the madness of Simon's mind. This is just madness... for the sake of madness! If I had to recommend something it would be to take out Elmo and Max Payne voices in this guy's head, it's fvcking stupid, to start off. And if you made the introduction a little more fleshed out, hell, have a cutscene where your character is driving a car, and the environment changes to a dark, hellish environment would get the player's attention right off the bat! Take out the crappy jumpscares and make some custom textures. And yes, making custom textures is hard as balls in Unity, I would know, but in order to keep the player interested you need immersion. The ending was more comedic than it was scary. Er mah gerd, my alarm clock turned into a monster ripped straight from SCP Containment Breach, oh noooo! It just made me die of laughter, rather than die of a heart attack. It's really disappointing to see the creator of 'FUN' and, of all things, 'Insert Title Here', would make such a mediocre title.
Overall, this game needs A LOT of work. It needs to be totally redone, with custom textures and a custom voice actor. The jumpscares need to be improved, and the storyline could be expanded on. The game needs to be longer, and the platforming must be removed.
Game: 3.5 / 10
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