Writer, author, editor, and perpetual fan of indie games. I've worked as a game writer for the past eight years, focusing on the indie scene as a journalist as well as a story/script writer for a few choice games.
Just wanted to say I've been enjoying the preview so far! It's a bit slow-paced, but the atmosphere is great and the music is stunning.
Loving the story and setting, but I'm concerned the frequent pauses for narrative exposition are destroying the flow. It's generally a bad idea to take control away from the player for any reason, and when I'm frozen in my tracks with the things I want to look at just a few steps away, it can be enormously frustrating. Otherwise, a very intriguing game!