Ugh former bio made me sad.

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For people new to my story, Parts 2 and 3 are here: Moddb.com and Part 1 is here: Moddb.com READ THEM FIRST!

Part 4
Location: The Aries...
Warren walks on to the bridge with some coffee and stares and the earth below, maybe for the last time before they head out. Kara soon joins him and as she sits down, says
"SoE is asleep, trying to get used to Ship time, he's ahead of it by 8 hours. Caine's going to sleep deprive himself to ship time because he's only ahead of it by 6 hours, he's unpacking his stuff right now, then he said he came up here"
Warren takes a sip, "Alex and Bob should be ready to beam up soon, after them it's Piper then Af...Mularac will be up after them. I'm going to my room for a bit. Maybe take one of the fighters out for a ride."
As he leave the bridge, she yell down the hall at him,
"Don't break it, ok?"
He yells back,
"I'll try not to!"
Caine runs past him, turns around and stops in front of Warren.
"Warren, you going to fly some?"
"Yea"
"can I come?"
"Why?"
"To test the 'Wing Man' program...say with a fly-by past the moon"
"The what?"
"It is a program I wrote based on the the 'Follow' program the Aries has. It's makes it so a un-manned '302 can fly in formation with a pilot. May try to code a targeting program so it can fire too"
"Sure. Grab an O2 suit."
Once in the hangar, Warren and Caine each start a 302, but Caine gets in Warren's fighter. Warren closes the cockpit and looks back at Caine.
"You ready?"
"Yea!"
"Tower, this Wolf 1, do you copy? Need Hangar bay two's hatch open"
The radio crackles to life,
"I copy Wolf 1, BAY DOOR two opening. Caine with you?"
"Roger, we're taking Wolf 2 out for auto-pilot testing"
"All right, I'll buzz you when they're all here and ready to go"
Wolf 1 and 2 rocket out of the hangar, start to fly around the Aries.
Caine looks at what will be his home in the coming weeks, and states
"Odd to think we are flying around in space..."
"Sure is...now...shall we have some fun?"
Warren says through a grin as he pulls back on the joystick, putting the ship through a flip.
"Caine, lets see how your program holds up. Start it on a port side follow formation."
"Done."
Warren flies around Aries with Wolf 2 off his port wing. Then he flies past the bridge, and just as he heads for the moon the radio comes back on,
"Wolf 1, you do that again, and 'tower' will kick you...HARD"
As Caine giggles in the back, Warren replies,
"I was just playing around, sorry"
Once over the moon, they decide to visit the landing sites of the Apollo missions. Just past the Apollo 11 site, Wolf 2 starts to fly oddly, then do a barrel roll over to the starboard side Of Wolf 1, right before Warren freaks out, Caine taps him on the shoulder.
"Did I scare you?"
"DID YOU DO THAT?!"
"Yea" Caine says with a hint of a giggle in his voice. "I am remote flying it from my controls on this ship. Kinda like playing a video game"
Just then, an Al'kesh decloaks, forcing Wolf 1 and 2 to pull apart. Warren and Caine loop around and come in for an attack run, but see the SGC logo next to a Wolf icon. Piper's voice comes over the radio,
"This is Wolf 11, nice moves 1 and 2. Everyone got all their stuff to the Aries and all but Kara and SoE are on the Wolf 11 with me. So...Let's head out"
Kara joins in,
"Wolves, this is Tower, come back to the den, doors are opening as we speak"
Warren pipes up,
"all right everybody, lets head home"
Most of the way back, Kara comes on over the radio,
"Wolf pack, this is tower, the hangar doors just closed and I have no idea why"
A gasp comes over the speakers,
"Warren, the "call" program just came online, and I just got locked out of navigation."
Anything she said after that was cut off by the Aries opening a hyperspace window and jumping away.

DROOL OVER THAT, YOU NET MONKEYS! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH

For people new to my story out there, Parts 2 and 3 are here: Moddb.com and Part 1 is here: Moddb.com

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SonofEvil
SonofEvil - - 1,477 comments

Damn, your evil...I hate you for that :P Well bro, it looks good.....

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Kage.Ookami Author
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1. I find it funny that sonofEVIL hates me for being evil...maybe you should be calling me Dad, not Bro, with a name like that.
2. thanks for saying it's great.

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SonofEvil
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And I'm enjoying it!

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SonofEvil
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Haha.....Well, your not reaaaly evil, just, just.....um...um...Suspensefull!! :P

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Kage.Ookami Author
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Nice job pulling out of that nose dive kid

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SonofEvil
SonofEvil - - 1,477 comments

Well, I do like flying :P Oh, damn...

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Kage.Ookami Author
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I take it you just worked out the fact you are on the ship headed to who knows where

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Mularac
Mularac - - 2,910 comments

just a small question... who was the one talking from the Al'Kesh?

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SonofEvil
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Piper

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Kage.Ookami Author
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Yea, thx SoE. It was her.

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SonofEvil
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No, problem.

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SCΛRECROW
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Couldn't resist buzzing the bridge/tower, could you?

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Mularac
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the legacy of top gun, I pressume.

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SCΛRECROW
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It does seem that way.

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami - - 2,938 comments

-.-
no.
That movie never even came to mind at any point in the making of this book. Nor will it ever.
anyways...
So I finished writing Book 1, (this book, of which there is two more parts) and started writing Book 2. I got about 2-3 pages into it...and it glitched out. Lost all of Book 2. That's right, ALL of it. I am never going that long without saving EVER again.

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SCΛRECROW
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Lost?! Damn...

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Kage.Ookami Author
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yea......
I remember what I wrote and already started again. and I am saving a lot...

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SCΛRECROW
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Ctrl+S FTW! I also learnt the hard way...2 hours of essay gone...

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Kage.Ookami Author
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yea...I am on a phone, so rules change a bit. Got about 1/4-1-2 back already. I am heading for bed.
Good night cruel world.
xD

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SCΛRECROW
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Huh? Crashes on a phone? Was it running Windows Mobile? :P

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Kage.Ookami Author
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Yea, biz class phone. even has office moblie.

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SCΛRECROW
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Haha, that makes sense. :P

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SonofEvil
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Good luck, my friend.

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jjawinte
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Well I too wish you good luck with that recovery, and the story's coming along alright; sorry, a bit comic bookish, but a good story just the same. Keep at it !

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami - - 2,938 comments

Thank you. did it all again already, plus some. as far as the style, I was kinda going for that of a real SG show, with the part breaks being like where a commercial would be. *gets bad idea*
hahahahahah
5 and 6 will be up soon

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SonofEvil
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Awesome, cant wait.

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