Ugh former bio made me sad.

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This is chapter 1 of my story, hope you like it, more coming.

Chapter 1
The Light

Location: a living room in West Canada...
With the Xbox sound up high, Alex and Bob just finished playing a game.
"Man, it's boring" Alex mumbles as he lets out a sigh. Bob yawns and says "Yea, I wish something would happen" as he puts the controller down and gets up to move around, he looks over to see Alex surfing the web. "Hey Alex, anything fun happening on Moddb?" "Nah, even Sensu is being quiet....that worries me" A light fills the room and Alex says "Why do I think he has something to do with this?" Any reply from Bob is cut off as they both disappear along with the light.

Location: a bedroom in South Africa...
SoE logs of his computer and picks up his guitar. "Hit my data cap for the month, time play some music..." The same light fills the room. He looks up and chuckles, "Looks like he got it to work, took him long enough. Oops, can't forget this!" He manages reach his pick just as him and the light vanish.

Location: a bedroom in England...
Caine slides into his chair, rubs his hands together, and says "Dust time...or should I do some lag training on halo...hmmm" The light appears. "Come on man! Now?" Grabs a J20 and waits to beam out...then starts to reach for his iPod, but is not quick enough "Hold on just let me get my....."

Location: a bedroom in East Canada...
As Piper closes a tab in her browser, her face wrinkles in disgust, "Oh no, either he's back or most of Croatia needs therapy..." Her computer flickers as the light starts to fill the room. "WHAT ON EARTH?!" she yells, but even if there was anyone there to answer her, she is gone before they would be able to...

Location: a paintball field in Argentina...
With bursts of CO2, paintballs fly past the players. Mularac lead three of his team mates forward, but the ground around him begins to glow, little spiders of static jump from his clothes to the ground. The game stops as everyone stares at the new star that seems to be growing before them, then Mularac and the glow disappear...

Location: a game room in south east USA...
Af is sitting in his chair, playing a game...he takes a drink of soda...looks at his watch, remembers his raman will be done soon. Checks it again, his raman still won't be done for about a minute. "I feel like I am missing out on something..." He shrugs and unpauses his game.

End chapter 1

Should I post the Chapters when I am done with them in my blog or as a DL? Tell me on the comment board.

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SonofEvil
SonofEvil - - 1,477 comments

Haha!! AWESOME!!!

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami - - 2,938 comments

...you didn't answer me...about how to post it..

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SonofEvil
SonofEvil - - 1,477 comments

Sorry, I just read that bit XD...IMHO, I think you should do it on your blog...

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami - - 2,938 comments

kk

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Mularac
Mularac - - 2,910 comments

hahaha nice! I'd like to see where this is going... keep'em coming!

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Arise_from_the_ashes
Arise_from_the_ashes - - 292 comments

I concur. Keep it up!

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SCΛRECROW
SCΛRECROW - - 3,491 comments

Interesting...

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jjawinte
jjawinte - - 5,067 comments

Keep this going ! It's pretty interesting. Well written.

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Dr.Afanickton
Dr.Afanickton - - 1,183 comments

i dont eat ramen everyday ya know. its a once a month delicacy for me. it makes it special :3, now chicken on the otherhand... mmmm.... and i dont wear a watch unless i go outside D:, and i dont drink soda when gaming, soda makes me sleepy sleepy D: only water :s, but yeah everything was good! :D

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami - - 2,938 comments

good to see you all like it! Ch. 2 is done, I'll post it next time I am on my computer.

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