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Really really bad. This sounds rude but it's true, I dont care that it's your first custom story, there is no excuse for the crud that is this custom story. My first one (The House) was even better than this, and that wasn't even that good.
I wouldn't release the first FIRST custom story you ever make, other wise it turns out like this.
This is the final one. There was supposed to be another, but I screwed it up beyond repair.
For people with downloading issues (Off of Moddb)
Oops, forgot about that. It used to replace the main monster, but it moved to slow for it to work.
Bug reports are welcome, it'll help me clean up this story!
Why would you like to join our group? What skills do you have?
There's a key on one of the shelves.
Uh, this mod isn't out. I don't know why it says it is. I set the release for Q4 2012.
Look on the shelves.
Love the video.
Hello... I sent you a PM about your application to the team and have still gotten no response. What would you like to do in order to assist us?
Dropped Chapter 2. If you want to know I'll tell you.
Thanks. I'm also putting a lot of the effort into the just-announced sequel, but, don't get me wrong, my team is doing a good job on Chapter 0 also.
I can ask for donations regardless of it's quality, indeed, the quality does put more possible donations on the table, It's just an added bonus. I'm not making you do it, so I don't think it's a big deal.
EDIT: Sorry, just noticed how hostile this sounds.
The scripts were really well made, I really liked the effort you put into the code. And, the level design was out of this world for your first custom story. Although, I got extremely bored. I ran around in circles not knowing what to do, and every scare included a monster. I found absolutley nothing to hold my interest. The custom music is terrible, it does not fit in with the environments, and overall just sounds bad. The story is terrible from what I've seen, I read about 3 notes, and I would have continued but I crashed trying to enter a door. The English was also very bad. 4/10
Aren't you that guy that banned me from his server because you didn't believe I was a Facepunch mod?
I love how it looks like you put a load of effort into this, and I also love those modern day props. Keep up the good work <3
Patch 1.3 uploading now
No, 12 days of working does not get you a 10/10. Come back to me when you've worked for 5 months like me,
Patch 1.2 uploading atm.
Currently uploading a patch that has been severely tested! Will be up in a day or two. Please report any bugs you find!
The download is currently being approved by Moddb, and has been for the past day, I apologize for the inconvenience. For now, I have uploaded a mirror:
I think we live in different timezones, this comes out in 11 hours.