Comments - AngelOfMordor

I just picked up the Alien Device and I have no clue whatsoever what to do with it?

Why are people yapping away about stolen assets? Just look at the mod itself for christ sake!

DnALANGE is a amnesia legend so please just take a moment and try to enjoy his work.

Do you have skype?

Yeah! I can help you :)

Okay, cool! If you need someone to help you with grammar or anything else I can help you out if you want?

No, it was not difficult. I think that it didn't make any sense.

Okay. I hope to see more pictures, trailers, gameplay in the meantime!

Okay, cool. I'm looking forward to that :) Can you tell us a release date?

Hmmm, alright. Good luck with the project :)

Hey PLAZER, I just finished your little demo here. I like the idea of being Sherlock Holmes. But this demo wasn't very good to be honest. The areas lacked detail. Adding a few plants or small things like that will make a huge difference so the rooms won't look too empty. I noticed that English isn't your first language, which is okay, but the grammar in your custom story demo is not very good. Try to find someone on the forum or a friend of yours to correct it. If you do this your custom story will increase in quality. I also didn't really like that your demo wasn't different than others. What I mean by this is that Sherlock Holmes is a Detective, but that didn't really show in your CS.
I loved the music in the CS. I am a big fan of old music and this made me have a huge smile on my face while playing this. I also didn't really get the key and crowbar thing with the code.

Summary:
- Your idea has great potential but it didn't really work in your CS
- Let someone help you with fixing the grammar.
- Add more detail to areas and don't make them so generic. (bed, three rooms)
- Try to change the gameplay as Sherlock Holmes is a detective.
- Don't make the areas too close to each other because I heard the water monster through a wall in one of the last parts of the demo.
-The levers were a bit buggy. I had to move my mouse up first and then down.
-Try to use custom monsters because not many people find the original monsters scary anymore. (you can get these from other custom stories)
-There was not enough oil for my lantern, in the last part with the monster I was running through the dark and couldn't find the exit.

Despite the problems I am still hyped for your custom story. I hope you will take my tips into consideration and good luck!

-AngelOfMordor

PS: What was the name of that song in the corridor level? I loved it! :D