A number of points just from the Prologue for fixing:
1) There is a spelling mistake - "Eifel" instead of "Eiffel".
2) A number of words do not have the correct spacing (likethis).
3) The written text on occasion does not match with the spoken dialogue.
4) If you go to a door on the right when you enter the main room, you can walk through and fall out of the world.
Managed to reach the creature in Chapter 3 so far but not figured out how to open the gate yet. I think the genre "Adventure" may be more fitting than "Visual Novel" as there is a lot more interaction involved. Hope I can reach the end next try, looking forward to more in the future.
akose
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I mostly play Visual Novels or games with a strong story element. One day I may even have time to make my own...