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three hells [fantasy] [first chapter's paragraph's draft #1] | Locked | |
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Mar 29 2009 Anchor | ||
Ok, as you know I've posted the start of my novel in a thread here, but since that particular piece of work is over 4 years old, I've decided to re-write it, and start all over with it, but I need some guidance here, as the start is crucial to any novel. *** ******************************** I'll post more when I have it. corrrection: it shouldn't read "human worlds", but rather "human nations". I don't know why stargate crossed my mind then. odd. |
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Apr 19 2009 Anchor | ||
Mularac! The introduction was gripping as it leaves the reader with lots of questions regarding the war , but what makes it really hooking is the talking about the Archangels and the one lung dragons as, in my point of view, the reader will be eager to know how exactly the writer imagines them and how they differ from the every day image we have. The length seemed fine to me and the "ring" was easy to find too . Lots of Love, Porcelain Doll |
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Apr 19 2009 Anchor | ||
Oh well thanks for passing by. Well.... one thing: the ones you said "new parts" are actually "old parts" the one that says introduction is an old piece of writing, describing how the war started and everything, this one is the big deal (although I am to implement what I wrote there here. And your idea is actually a good one, I'm taking it under some serious consideration, specially the part regarding the religious system, I think I'm gonna make the whole first chapter only from Mularac's point of view and only then change to the other main characters (who will be, again, cut down... too old protagonist will become mere secondary characters. |
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