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Jul 27 2011, 2:09pm Anchor

im working on my  first sc  fi horror  book   called  sovo.   
im new to making books  i worked on my up coming game  story  mass wars  and  working  a prequel for the game 
i would like some tips.  
heres a little bit of the story of sovo  
I wake up in a hall way, cold and  with no one  near me.  I get up and  I'm by a window, I look out the window  and say: where am I.   I  see  nothing but  space rocks and stars.  I turn away from the  window and I see this huge  hulking  creature right in my  face,  it picks me up with one hand and  gets  ready to cut me in half with the other.  i closed my eyes hoping it was all dream but when I open them I  realize its not a  dream.  boom!!!! it stabs me with its other hand. I  fall down dead. 
so tell what u think and   what i can  do to improve

Aug 9 2011, 9:13pm Anchor

Add more descriptions of the surroundings - and also describe how your character is FEELING while all this is going on.

Aug 9 2011, 10:52pm Anchor

alright thx

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