The lightning shadow - Russian Translation
Patch 1 commentВы проснулись в комнате, но не знаете, как вы себя чувствуете. У вас проблемы с сердцем...
You woke up in a strange room and you don't know who you are. A "thing" is watching you. The only thing you know is you have a heart problem who can immobilize you in critical moments. Can you escape of this strange mansion ? This is my first Custom Story for Amnesia : The Dark Descent. Sorry for my bad English, i'm French. If anyone do a video of my Custom Story, i invit them to post the link of you're video and you're opinion. Maintenant en français : Ceci est ma première Custom Story pour Amnesia : The Dark Descent. Si quelqu'un fait une vidéo sur ma Custom Story, je vous invite à laisser le lien de votre vidéo dans les commentaires et de laisser votre avis dessus. Vous vous réveillez dans une salle et vous ne savez plus qui vous êtes. Quelque chose vous observe. La seule chose dont vous vous rappelez est que vous avez un problème cardiaque qui peut vous immobiliser dans des moments critiques. Arriverez vous à vous échapper de cette maison ?
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Full Version 2 commentsThis is the full version of the Custom Story : The Lightning Shadow. If you find some bugs, report them in the comments, i will maybe remove them if i...
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Full walkthrough (English version):
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A grunt charging at you while he sees you through walls; A silly cheap jumpscare after you pick up an item; A suitor coming at you, while you don't have the opportunity to escape; A brute charging at you while you stand still watching without the opportunity to run from him immediately; A second brute charging at you while you're on the ground lying helplessly; Putting you in a situation where you don't have the chance to escape..I think that's enough to consider it a troll story. This custom story is bad. The grammar mistakes were funny too. Even tho your native language isn't English that doesn't mean you can't ask a native speaker to help you out, does it? I'm sorry, I know you've put some effort in this but I can't rate it more than 3. If it's your first custom story, then fine, I guess. But remember that if you wanna create a good custom story forget about cheap jumpscares, monsters charging at you through walls, putting the player in helpless situations, etc. And ask a person to help you out with using proper English. I'm sure you can do better than that ;]
Maybe i has a little abused ^^'. But this is my first Custom Story, not perfect. Your comment will help me in the futur. Now i need to find anyone to help me for the traduction. Thanks to you.
P.S : I don't like screamers too.
Yeah! Don't get me wrong. I'm just giving you honest feedback. I've played 235 custom stories so far, so you could say I do have experience :) Btw here's a link to my playthrough of your custom story :
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If you have a request for me to play a certain custom story, feel free to tell me ;] I'm not hating. Just some honest feedback ;] I'm not trying to bring you down by writing this. Just giving you tips, what you shouldn't use in your future custom stories. Good luck with your future projects ^^
you use quite good monster encounters, the design itself is not bad, well used bilboards, nice events i was able to see, even if some rooms (mostly in the prison) were empty and similar to other rooms which i've been before, so it was a bit linear. there were mementos, enough goodies to collect, and sometimes it was a bit hard (i died when i went outside after collecting the dagger, and sadly in the end). as your first custom story i'll give this a 7/10, because i liked. there were multiple endings and so on. but.. do not use teleporting naked guys again, they're nothing just annoying! fill the corridors and the other rooms with stuff also, write a more-detailed story next time, add some more complex puzzles and you will have a great custom story that you can release :)
If i use the teleporting door, this is because i was no choice. But soon, i will work on the chapter 2 of The lightning shadow and i will try to add some more complex puzzle, the story will be more detailed (A friend can help me for this), maybe a bit more long story and without teleporting door. Thanks for your comment, this will help me for the futur ;D
mmmh, nice also if don't there a corrosive for the good ending
PS. idk what goes this key that don't has any tag...
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Because it's strange if there is a tag with : "Unlock the door to the good end".Like that it force you to test all doors =D.