When a squad of rebels find themselves trapped under the ruins of City 17, they believed that their rescue would be a simple matter. A skirmish with an Overwatch scouting party, however, quickly escalates into a major battle amongst the debris, with great consequence.
Still needing some improvement, but hopefully more attractive. Although, I wonder, does the red light work in the last image? Feedback would be nice.
What red light?
Sorry, It's actually the second image. Uploaded in a different order than I expected.
You should have specified ambient light. And while yes, it does work, the atmosphere would be better if the white lights were changed to a dull yellow.
The only thing jarring in there is that odd barricade(?) It looks way too angular and "un-natural" Maybe just use a model or improve your brushwork.
Patchwork outpost? You got the rebel spirit nailed friend!