After five years working as a field doctor in a raging war, you are finally coming back home. Hunted by excruciating memories, you are looking for solace in an old mansion left to you by your great-grandfather. But how can you find peace when there is something lurking in the dark, something sinister and agonizing that won’t let you sleep. The only question remains: is it just a figment of your imagination or is there something more to it? The story is inspired by the famous cursed painting of The Anguished Man.
Looks Great!
Especially the lighting, good luck!
There's not enough contrast, there are too many dark spots. Add ambient lightingm and fog.
Also add particles with very low brightness to add more depth.
However one good thing about this scene is the color combination, iterate it.