Follow the adventures of Milena and her psychic teddy bear totem in a world where psychics and normal humans coexist. In this adventure she enters into a mysterious realm inside a painting and must try to find her way back out into the real world amidst the labyrinth of intrigues and conspiracies inside the painting world.
This all looks great. The content looks rich and thorough. But do you want us to pinpoint typos and grammatical errors? I mean, will this content be visible in the game? If so, the errors should be cleared away.
I also think the Origins section could use a bit of revision. The first sentence could be rewritten to save some space and clarity. The phrase "very" in "...governed by a very different subset..." could be removed to make the text sound more professional. And introducing WIT would constitute introducing a new theory to replace or contest quantum mechanics.
Good idea, I haven't had the chance to get this proof-read by any english native speakers (english is not my first language) and will do so for future entries!