A short story made by Krusti and Shyrtexx in under 24 hours as part of a challenge. Play as the lovely Miss Stevenson as she wakes up like any other day to prepare food for her lover. Notice: Please do not translate this mod without expressed permission from the authors

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A short and sweet little story that provides lots of optional context and monologue from the main character.

It takes less than 15 minutes and is absolutely worth the time.

10

defo one of the best SHORT stories out there (guys chill it's a 24h project going harsh on this one is ridiculous)

Who said you needed monsters to make a good custom story?

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Secretial says

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I genuinely enjoyed this. I liked the plot twist at the end a lot. The design was great for a 24-hour challenge, better than I expected. Definitely worth giving a try.

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HumiliatoR says

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Decent little project made in 24 hours, is pretty impressive, what comes to design and detailing. :)

7/10 - Must play for a 24 hour challenge!

In terms of design, this isn't about anything spectacular, but given that the mod was created in such a short time, it is understandable. I really liked the puzzle with cooking food. The story is very simple, but I really liked the twist at the end.

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WrecxXD says

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This time I am gonna write a review with this format. I am also gonna consider that it was made in 24 hours.

Building / Details - Building and details are really good for a 24 hour challenge. 9/10

Lighting - This is the only thing I didn't like because all the maps just have a boxlight all over them with no real lighting (expect windows), even tho it's a 24 hour challenge you still could've made it better. 6/10

Story - The story was jokeish but it was a nice plot twist, I guess. 7/10

Puzzles - There weren't too much puzzles cause it was short but I liked the pot puzzle other then that I can't say anything special. 7/10

Scripting - Good enough for this challenge. 8/10

Overall it's good if you consider it was made in 24 hours, short but interesting, so 8/10. (sidenote: I don't give ANY story a rating below 5/10, not that it matters here but still) :)

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zys says

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KiraImmortal says

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TroHea says