Currently anything older than the Ominous photos are going to be receiving a major revamp and are not up to my current standards, so what you see there is much more lackluster than the final product will be. I have already started using more details and fog in the newer maps.
But thanks for the suggestions! They are always welcome!
This is just some advice, you don't need to take my word for it-
I assume this is your first custom story and it is looking good. But you should try to add more detail to your environments, such as more furniture, windows etc.Also try to give every room a purpose and a reason. From what I can see you are mostly lacking in detail and variety, if you can work on that you will see a very large improvement. Also try not to use monsters to early in the story.
I also liked how you used the custom monster sound in the video! using custom sounds and music really helps make the story scarier and unique. Keep working and practicing and you will get better and make great stories!
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