Glad you appreciated it. :) Good luck.
I sincerely hope that you make much more improvements to your story in the completed version. Right now, I feel like it wasn't worth my time. Just some honest criticism.
edit: screen-tearing is rampant in the story, just so you know.
I honestly felt like you went for Quantity over quality here, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, and this is from my impression of it from several months ago. I felt that you lacked creativity in ripping music from the Zelda games as well.
However, Your story is quite impressive compared to some of the others I've seen, plus the boss battle at the end was very well done, I'd just thought I'd give a little feedback. I guess I like things that are original.
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