Wow. When I went to your page, my jaw dropped. I can't believe you're even giving me the time of day to critique! Thank you so much, it means a lot to me.
The whole thing started out one night when I was playing Shattered Memories. I just love physiological things and analyzing characters. I love seeing what makes them tick and decides their actions..it's just so cool to me. I suppose that's what got me thinking; how would each of these characters react in Silent Hill, their own personal nightmare?
The reason why I designed the story as a game was because that was originally what I wanted to make it. I wanted a little practice for my career, so I thought it would be fun. It also helps me make decisions that would otherwise be hard to make. Maybe I think things through too much. But I never thought of writing out a description of the page; I definitely think it will help me out a lot.
What's funny is that half the time I don't even think of the plot. It's usually me, sitting in class during a lecture and doodling in Ashley's style, and when it turns out something that looks like it could fit, I usually add it into the story. Like a few days ago, I just doodled a little Claire looking up a stairwell with her flashlight, and a Leon jumping back at a jump scare, and I incorporated all of those into the story. Now I just have to finish writing it out.
And thank you! I'm still working on a lot of things right now, and the things you said I did well on are actually the things I struggle the most with. I'm still working on them, but I am definitely getting better with practice. I might just post it here, as this will be the first place I will post any of my new works. I'm just not sure if I'm allowed to since this is a mod site x)
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Kiran here. I like post-apocalyptic things and russians and WWII and aliens and space. I also like motorcycles and survival horror anything. Queen fan 'till I die. Style of art changes with certain projects, and I can change for something specific. Aspiring to be a concept artist/game design/level design/character design artist. I also like cats.