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This story based on a real life story but details have been changed.


If you have an interest after reading it tell me and I'll continue ,now I'll let you with it ==>>

Once upon a time there's a peaceful city in a peaceful country ,the city was known as an important center of all kind of industry and trading businesses its people were famous in the country and in
their region along the history that they can make and produce anything, in another hand and far from business they also were known for their love of making many kinds of delicious food.

The city was the economical center of its country and because of that there were many ill wishers who set their eyes on it cause they envy its people on their life and they don't like the way this
city live in all this peacefulness and Welfare ,this irritate their black hearts so they decided to interrupt it and mess it up and so those dark people start to move to live in the city trying to get a hold on something important some day so they can carry out their evil plan , year after year they grow in numbers but because of the good life they saw and the kindness of the people of the city all this time some of them start to have a change in their hearts and forgot about their black plan and decided ''why we don't live here a good life with this people and what if we mess with them and it didn't work , where could we find a better place to live in ?'' so they abandoned their black hearts and melted in the community .

But there were others didn't agree with this Ideas ,those who couldn't changes their life and find a peaceful one, even in the city and they thought it was the city's fault ;in reality it was their fault cause they were good-for-nothing-lazy- envious-scum people; a day after another they grow in
numbers and there were some areas that no one live in but them and a tiny number could reach by chance some sits in the government.

One day the whole country entered an unstable state this was a good Opportunity
for those black heart people to make a move.......

So what happened next ?


see you soon
The Writer and your friend__Horseman(War) : Maher
PS: sorry if there were some boring lines and writing mistakes

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_w_ - - 6,176 comments

If its based on current events in your country/city, it might be an intersting semi-real window in wats goin on there.

Atm tho youre really going to have to work on the story, wordings etc..
but regardless its good to write anyway, only way to get better.

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Horseman(War) Author
Horseman(War) - - 978 comments

I know it's simple-words story but I think if I'm going to write I'll get better each time and I'll learn from my mistakes :)

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_w_ - - 6,176 comments

Yes thats the spirit :P works the same with blender and drawing lel

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and those were his last words ;(

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