I think it could do without the "whale" electronic noises. It gets a bit too busy at times too I feel. 20-23. 44-~50 as well. I feel that the atmosphere of the track is taken away from by these sections feeling a bit too lively. The rest of the song is quite atmospheric, mysterious even a little romantic (imo) and those parts don't seem to suit it.
I've quite enjoyed listening to the track, so there's definitely a lot of good there and the above are only my opinions, not meant as any sort of detriment against what is essentially a good track.
I think it could do without the "whale" electronic noises. It gets a bit too busy at times too I feel. 20-23. 44-~50 as well. I feel that the atmosphere of the track is taken away from by these sections feeling a bit too lively. The rest of the song is quite atmospheric, mysterious even a little romantic (imo) and those parts don't seem to suit it.
I've quite enjoyed listening to the track, so there's definitely a lot of good there and the above are only my opinions, not meant as any sort of detriment against what is essentially a good track.
Good luck with the game!