Comments - MaccaSvenne

It's not that I didn't understand it, per se. It's that it was very taxing to read for the reasons I stated above. And seeing as the CS is all about the notes and story, I simply lost interest. But I think it's best just to end this discussion here if it's just me that felt like something was off. I appreciate your effort and willingness to help though. Good luck with your future projects.

Don't get me wrong. There's been much, much worse English in many other custom stories. It's just something about the words you use and the way you put them together that just made it a pain to read for me. If no one else feels the same, great. There's no denying that for your first custom story, you did a really good job. It just didn't fit me personally, I guess. **** happens.

This probably could have been a quite good custom story if someone with good English had translated the notes from the author's native language. The strange thing is while the words themselves are mostly correct, they just don't fit together to form sensible sentences and it is really taxing reading all the notes because of this. Such a shame too since this is mostly story-driven, with loads of notes and might actually have a decent plot. While I really tried deciphering them and getting into the story, it turned out it was impossible for me to get immersed and when I started just skipping the notes there were nothing left really, and I'd just quit.