Lost Windows game

The story of the game is in progress. Lost is centered around 17 year old Yokou. He had a very traumatizing childhood and normally keeps his distance from people. One day he is at home on the computer when he starts feeling dizzy. When he tryed to get up he fail unconscious. He woke up to find himself in a cold, dark house. His vision was still a little blury, but he could pick out that he was most likely in the basement of some building. When he gets out of the basement, he saw a little girl. She had black hair and a red dress on, But at the bottom of the dress it was all ragged and torn, and she appeared to be floating. She had no legs it looked like.

I am currently developing the story more. I will try to update my Progress daily. Tell me what you think of the story so far!

Don't be afraid to ask questions, i will answer them to the best of my ability.

Thanks! ^_^