I hate the summary ting haha. But ummm. So The reason that I haven't been working lately, as you know, is my steam has been suspended. It still is, but no for much longer I promise you guys. I also read over my story and I did realize there was some major major issues with it. In a sense it didn't make any sense and it was just flat out stupid. I am currently working on it a little more in hopes that I will soon get my SDK back and be able to work on the maps that I am writing for. I am working hard currently on a good strong story with twists and turns. Unlike before the story will be plausible. So please hold on and wait for some up coming updates including: Maps, Concept art, models, story, news, and maybe a new member or two.
Thank you,
Assassin17
If by story you mean the thing you have written in the top part then I don't know if it's "stupid" per se. Whatever you are redoing now, maybe you could put some more effort into writing it more like something you read at the back of a book. Don't tell everything you know. Get the peoples attention by revealing just enough information with interesting choice of words etc instead of sorta blurting them out. Could you tell the story from Reese's perspective instead of an objective narrator? It is the role in which you are trying to fit the player.
Hope you get your Steam back soon.
What I told on top wasn't the storyline, it was the base idea. And stupid as in it didnt make much sense to me. I know nothing about Chile and research for it was beyond difficult. Thank you for the advise, though.