This is the Intro of the mod Night Runner. Please Give your opinions, suggestions, and Critisism!
Intro
No trust. No weapons. No hope.As a little boy you were not like the others, your muscles allowed you to jump higher, and run much faster than regular muscles. As a teen you took advantage of those abilities and used them to rob people. Over the years people have been searching for you all over New York City. You are now a grown man living on the streets hiding from everyone. Your only objective is to escape New York City without being caught. Your brother is monitoring the cameras of the city to help you escape. The only way now, is to run.
No trust. No weapons. No hope.As a little boy you were not like the others, your muscles allowed you to jump higher, and run much faster than regular muscles. As a teen you took advantage of those abilities and used them to rob people. Over the years people have been searching for you all over New York City. You are now a grown man living on the streets hiding from everyone. Your only objective is to escape New York City without being caught. Your brother is monitoring the cameras of the city to help you escape. The only way now, is to run.
Really good ! Keep polishing the main concept to avoid any plot holes. Because i'm afraid there mite be . Anyways good luck ! :)