So basically, I just moved to Unity 5 (Really late, I know.) and it is incredible... you can do so much with it and I still have a lot to learn. So anyway, recently I haven't been able to do much cause of assessments (School stuff) and I wasn't able to work on the game a lot. But recently I've been getting back into it and right now I'm experimenting with Unity 5 and I've been designing the next level of The Final Roses which is the 11th level. So basically my offer is, I am currently writing a dialogue script for the demo and I want someone to read it through to see if I can change some stuff and make it more dramatic, it is a story-driven game after all. So the demo just gives you a brief on the main story itself rather than Bella's dark past and yeah, I just wanted to offer someone if they wanted to read it through. First one to message me about the script is the one I'm giving it too. Thank you for all your support and I hope you all have a good day/night. (I should also add that, whoever decided to read the demo script will get first hands on with the demo.)
Unity 5, other stuff and Special offer (Not that special).
Hey guys, this is just a quick news feed just to tell you what I've been working on. Unity 5 and an offer.
Posted by sean4d on
Awesome!
Sounds more like a sporadic lottery contest for your own pleasure than a way to get feedback on the story. If you want good input, you've got to listen to more than one mouth and you've got to have more than one ear.
Hey there! I do have other people ready to test the demo, I just want someone from the public to give me some more feedback. It's no lottery, I just want another persons opinion rather than someone I know personally. If you think I do this for my pleasure, sorry if it sounded like that. I just don't want to risk giving away too much information about the game to too many people. So all I was asking for, is if there was some improvements I could do with the writing.
Glad to hear that you're getting feedback from more than one person. Though I was wrong on one bit. You do what you want as you please and if you did not have fun creating the game well your feelings will be "betrayed" by it once it's released. I believe that's valid for everything humans create.