Wilson Chronicles is a total Source conversion of Half-Life Wilson Chronicles.
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Introduction for Wilson Chronicles :
Mapping by Frere D'Arme & FrEEmAn, Alpha 6
Nice lookin'.
God, this is awesome. My only suggestion would be to add a decal or something by the rocks to make the transition more gradual. Still, it's extremely good.
Don't worry about infodecals/overlays :)
I'm still working on it so it's getting cooler :D
It can't get much cooler than this.
That simply looks epic. Not sure however about the rocks in the middle of that screenshot.. Looks like the rocks are falling out of the rocks below them.. On the left side it is fitting but not in the middle.
It looks really nice.
Not nearly as good as your indoors mapping, here's some help!
-The rocks on the right side of the picture don't look very good, it seems like you spammed props one on top of another, I'd look at more reference photos perhaps?
-The road texture also seems too blue-ish (roads usually seem darker) and it also looks too clean to be in a desert.
-The area looks a little too hilly in general, and from the view it looks too boxed-in and linear/cramped feeling.
-The lighting also seems off, the skybox is so bright yet the shadows are dull and even the bright areas lack a real brightness.
Although I said your indoor stuff is better, this isn't ugly! Just a lot to improve on.
Thank you for the feedback, I'll try to improve it on the points you mentioned.
Desert is cool !