You are on vacation in the south of France, invited by an old friend who settled there a few year ago. Not far from the village stills stand the ruins of a very old castle, set on top of a massive rocky spur. Not much remains of the ancient fortress but a few collapsed walls already erroded by time. Yet you've decided to give it a closer look, after all the view from the top of that mountain would be breathtaking by itself. You are there, wandering amongst these old stones, when the rain starts pouring down. You are looking for some shelter, when suddenly...

Gaviao says

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too boring, you have to walk too much and there's no events in the cs... and that's what attract me =/

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Highest Rated (4 agree) 9/10

Enjoyed this CS and also feared some parts too. However, there are some things you could improve: --> Use more paragraphs in the letters to make them more appellative to read: people will look at the walls of text and be turned off immediately, relying in the mementos instead, only to find later that the letters actually had hints in the middle of the text. --> Some stuff was really hard to find like the crowbar and the key in the excavation site. No hints were given towards the crowbar at…

Jul 29 2013 by ShiningBlader