this is a update. its my first amnesia custome story and it is a update i hope you like it:)
Positives:
- Scared the crap out of me
- For a new mapper, it's an okay story in whole
- Okay scripting (working monster path nodes, quests etc)
- I liked the ending actually (not the cliche "you escaped congratulations")
Negatives:
- Level design is not horrible but need a lot of work
- Lack details
- Story could be better as well
- Short
Conclusion:
Is the story stupid? Yeah.. kinda. Is it the worst story I have ever seen? No absolutely not. For a first story, it's actually okay.
Level design is okay, but you need to fix texture glitches, add more details, make sure items are not floating in the air and so on.
It only contain jumpscares but the scare in the torture area scared the crap out of me! You did that one really well! But next time, make some regular scares as well, not just jumpscares. At least you didn't spam with flying naked guys...
I see potential in you. Take your time on your next project, don't rush with it and practise a bit more.
4/10 - Okay
Pretty meh experience. Nothing unique offered here, pretty bland design, it was alright, but you can tell it's a very amateur custom story, there was no genuine fear and constant monsters. Pretty bad design, and is relatively short, just around 5 minutes.