This is my second custom story which I share on the internet. Please play my previous and later ones! Give me feedback and say what parts and things you liked and disliked! :) And if you want to know more about my works, follow me on twitter or like my page on Facebook!
It's ok.
I really liked the premise of the story, it drew my attention here.
It is a thrill ride, not to my particular taste, but it was a good story nonetheless.
I did not understand the thought process of a few "parts" though which confused me.
I like most of the level design, as it was comprised of empty rooms that expanded on the castle's "realism".
Scripting was ok, nothing really unexpected, though at times I got jumped.
I was tense at a few parts due to nothing happening which was terrifying, as I was tensing up, way too much.
It is not for me, as I like a good story with my "story", but the tension, level design and strange; at times. It was also fairly unoriginal, I felt that some rooms could have been added to make it more like a castle, as I never felt like I went to the upper floors that much which made it feel like a dungeon even more.
But it was a great thrill ride, so it wasn't all bad.
That's t for me.
Very good custom story. Could have used more clues but overall I enjoyed this one.
Very good.
Well, to me this story is a poot attempt at recreating the Amnesia main story.
Started good, but the horror and monsters came too soon with little to no build up of the atmosphere. The torture rooms were a lame copy of Amnesia ones.
The monster patterns were too predictable, to the point I just ran past them at some point.
The story telling was poor.
5/10, the points are because you were able to create a CS
This Custom story is very well done, the way you get into the scares is very well done and helps to keep you on target,
Go wandering about? Prepare to face some monsters.
Knowing the actually story is 100% Optional, this is done by keeping the entire story as notes left behind by the people trapped you in the castle so if you are just for the scares, the story won't be getting in your way.
The Design of each map in the story is carefully done to a point where you can get that constant atmosphere that everyone wants, no room is too dark or too bright and every room holds a surprise, they might help you or KILL you.
Long story short, try to avoid getting invited to a castle dinner party when everyone is never in the same room as you.
Good luck and sleep tight...
good story