I'm 12 years old so please don't complain!! This is a very short custom story and its my first!

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No good, tiny story, lasts just under 2 minutes, nothing special, avoid. Nothing going for it.


Story: ✕
First of all, the storyline itself was extremely cliché. Second of all, the notes in the game made absolutely 0 sense- "hi simon! i am dead when you read this. i started seeing some creatures with mouths 3 years ago.. i don't know! be careful!" First of all, how did his grandpa know he was going to be dead when his grandson finds the note?
= 1/10

Mapping: ✕
Very, very bland and rushed, I see. Long corridors with tons of statues and otherwise, almost nothing. = 1/10

Scare factor: ✕
There was not even a single point, where I felt scared. I knew excatly what was going to happen.
However, there was a single point where I excepted nothing, but then, lame jumpscare with naked guy came in. I almost gave up with the story at that point. = 1/10

Atmosphere: ✕
Not even gonna say anything for this. Nonexisting. = 1/10

Puzzles: ✕
Key guests which were extrelemy simple. = 1/10

Creativity: ✕
:) = 1/10

none. 1/10

Overall: Very, very very bad.


only because your 12 I give this a 3


i played for about 4 min and the grunt got stuck in the closet wtf!


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Yomamma? It's just a ************* key? I don't care if you are 12, this is a serious community with serious stories. You have to start thinking about the community if you are uploading your stories for the community.

You think it's fun to type childish things like that? But does the rest of us think it's fun? People rate it 1/10 so apparantly, they don't.

You said you made it for pewpiedie. Then why did you upload it here? Send it to him then! To be honest, I don't see why even Pewdiepie would enjoy this map :s

You even took a picture from Mansion 1408 wich is misleading and a very pathetic thing to do, since it's not yours. You have potential, you can use the level editor after all, but you have to grow up and actually spend time on your work in the future.


- You know how to make simple scripts, that's a start
- You know how to upload your map... if that's good or bad I don't know


- You took a picture a picture from Mansion 1408 Moddb.com congratulations, you are a thief
- No music, almost no ambient sounds, bad lightning, no details...
- No story
- Childish humour
- 20 seconds long
- Horrible level design. A long corridor with 20 statues, some drawers and a few other things and a bedroom is supposed to be a house? Are you serious dude?

Not worth the 20 seconds it has to offer

1/10 - Pointless


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