A small passage For the dominion and good luck!!!!
Review for Dominion Life:
Mission 1 - Descent size map, enemies spread out for a nice gauntlet, however lacking in certain doodads to give it a real creative look.
There appears to have a purple marine, however isn't the hero. the grammar in the briefing and mission needs improvement.
Recommendations: Add a Hero, fix Grammar, use Doodads in terrain. Link Mission 1 to Mission 2.
Mission 2 - Grammar is Mission brief needs fix, and dialogue in the mission as well. Map Layout ok, with descent expansions and great challenge to capture them, however it seems a bit redundant, and could use some work about mineral placement.
Recommendations: Add a better Hero (firebat not really that useful for this mission), Fix Grammar. Link Mission 2 to Mission 3, Make the AI a bit harder.
Mission 3 - Terrible Map, Bad mineral placement, very spread out for 4 computers. My starting base is pretty overkill, and I hardly had to build anything. All I needed to do was upgrade and research and I won before I finished upgrading.
Recommendations: Fix Grammar, better Mineral placement, use Doodads in terrain. Link Mission 3 to Mission 4.
Mission 4 - Completely unplayable. the enemy didn't attack my base, and I nuked every base since my hero didn't take much damage since I can cloak well. No minerals (not that I needed any) or gas for the enemy computer to attack or use AI.
Recommendations: Fix Grammar, Add Mineral placement, use Doodads in terrain, Add AI, Link Mission 4 to Mission 5.
Mission 5 (Final) - The Final map is an lacking doodads for doors and I had way too many units. i completed the mission really fast and felt it had too many units for just killing Jim Raynor.
Recommendations: Fix Grammar, Less units, Add Doodads (like doors).
Rating: 2/10
Personal Note: Your getting better at terrain, but you gotta use Doodads more. The AI seems a bit lacking this time around and your going to need better work on the grammar. these maps don't seem to be done very long and seems like you take about a day making maps and then upload it here. try to put more effort so it can be more enjoyable.
I hope to see better from you in the future.