My second custom story with same theme like my previous one. Okay maybe technically better and maps looks more decent than in first one but still. Don't expect any story line. It's like jumpscare simulator. Well some people enjoy these kind of customs...
It makes me really sad to see that you, a really talented level designer waste your time on lame stories like this!
Some of the areas epic! Really beutiful and perfectly designed! But the "story"... 100 key quests, nothing makes sense (you told us that it's not a serious story, but come on! This is horrible) and worst of all, you said you hoped it's scary. 1000 jump scares are NOT scary! The first jumpscare was scary, but then I realized "oh, it's a jumpscare story" and was prepeared for everything so it was not scary at all after that.
FLYING NAKED GUYS ARE NOT SCARY IN LENGHT! AND NO ONE OVER 10 THINK IT'S FUN WITH FARTING GUYS IN A CLOSET!
I rated your first story 4/10 and I'm afraid this is a 4/10 as well since the only thing you improved a little is the level design. Nothing else is improved at all. You didn't even take your time to add a proper ending, da fuq?
Next time, make a deep, serious story with the same epic level design and it can, with passion and love, become one of the most epic stories out there!
4/10 - Okey