My name is Alex Last Month For A Castle Guest I Do not Know What The Name Which Is In Germany. I went to sleep I woke up the next day I called Answers For Employees Nobody I See Nobody spoke I cried But The Only Thing That I remember is I have fainted And Have Agreed Here Where I Am ....

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Alex's History

Alex's History

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The Map Have Possible Bugs So Tell me i think have in the map sewers enjoy my custom history i am work one weak on them

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ErrorUnknownGT
ErrorUnknownGT

1/10, well I got stuck unfortunately, up until that point it just really seemed like a very generic custom story, room/door opening simulator. I skipped a few rooms in one area, and needed an item in that area to progress it seems, so badly designed.

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CheesyDeveloper
CheesyDeveloper

My thoughts about this story.

1: Level design

The level design isn't horrible like a lot of stories made by new authors are, but it's not unique in any way, shape or form. It's as basic as it can be, with a few glitches here and there.

2: Story

Way too basic and really bland. *SPOILER* you wake up in a castle, the castle owner left a couple of notes, you find the exit and escape from the monster, the end.

In the future, make the story more unique and complex. If you can't think of any other storylines than "you wake up in a castle and must escape", then at least explain why the monsters are after the player, who the owner is and why he/she is doing this to you. This story doesn't have any of that either.

3: Atmopshere

Ruined by overused jumpscares. Actually, some of the scares were decently scary, but you used 100% jumpscares. Using so many gets annoying and repeditve.

4: Etc

Please, start using commas and dots! The notes are horribly written with grammar mistakes everywhere. Everyone makes mistakes, I don't think I have played a single story without any typos or grammar mistakes, but the notes are so bad it's really hard to understand them.

Conclusion:

Another story about a man escaping from a castle he woke up in without really knowing why. To be a new mapper, the story isn't bad, but it lacks creativity.

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Sollandia
Sollandia

Just bad. You should practice on your english before making more. And start to use dots and commas.
1/10

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mohamm11
mohamm11

Agreed

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mohamm11
mohamm11

a lot of glitches in the water monster part and i got the hollow needle in the torture rooms and because of that i was able to skip the storage! 4/10

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KapralPOL
KapralPOL

Good one, i like this one. Good job. 8/10

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NureinVoter
NureinVoter

4/10

That was very linear and monoton.
And Jumpscares are annoying. They dont even scare me, they **** me off since they are SENSELESS and dont do anything.
Real fear can only brought forth by a skilled made environment.

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DerpAbility
DerpAbility

Best ending ever! XD

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