Hey guys,
As I've told you sometime ago, I have been working on the character chapters for my novel project, and I've just acquired a small sample for you guys to check out. Trust me, this is WAY better than the buggy first part I've uploaded before.
Link: Sdrv.ms
-Chizuru-
It's nice to see people work on their own VNs and stories yes?
But just remember take your time, let the Characters Develop themselves as you write so it doesn't seem forced.
Trust me, follow my advice and you will like the results.
Hai~ Will do, sempai :3
As this may prove to be slightly depressing Gomen nasai, Kawaii-sama.
the story is great thus far! keep going, Kawaii-Chizuru-sama, I believe you will be one of the worlds greatest authors if you learn to refine your story to include a little more back ground, and ( i see that this is "another preview" so maybe you did and I just did not see it). but it is sort of cute, and would make a great anime..... also it does need something on which to revlove right now you have the thoughts to have some focus but this needs to be honed a little more. if this is a stake to the heart then forgive me, for such.