Hi. I used to make custom stories for Amnesia: The Dark Descent, but now I am studying Software Development and do not have much time in my hands. I still pop up here and there, but not very often.
It was a very pleasant experience working on this mod, and playing other people's creations. I don't feel like you can rate it on how good it looks or feels, because it was made by so many people.
Therefore I give it 10 because I had a great experience working on it and playing it, with no downsides.
It was an ok map.
Things you need to improve:
You need to practice much more on mapping.
You have a lot of places where you can see through the walls, misplaced walls and just walls that look weird.
I wasn't able to finish the map since i got stuck. I found, that i had to find a "prison-door", but i couldn't find it. Instead i went to the place with the bed that blocks the door. The wall that is broken in that room is walkthrough-able! I could literally walk behind the walls, which was a little weird.
Some rooms and corridors weren't decorated at all... It takes time, but YES it works!
It's an ok CS.
I didn't get scared, but you put some effort in it and thats good.
I think there might be too much detail, but it's only my opinion.
You... We've already talked about it ;)
Good luck with the next one