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Ep 4: "Let the games begin"
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Sorry about the arrows, I know they're need, but I am not good at making them. Also, I now have a Twitter, that I will post news about the comic on.
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hahaha that must be a pain in the butt :P
Btw, someone told me that the arrows are not needed, what do you all think?
that he/she is right. Usually comics have a logical, predetermined sequence, occidental comics are read from left to right and oriental from right to left.
Ok, they won't be in the next one. Also, short of flaming, feel free to say what you want, help me make it better.
only one critic: Why, if Alex is obviously in a higher position than you, for the way he's aiming he's gun, the laser's coming from below?
That was going to be to be after he shot me, and I re spawned, there is someone (didn't decide who) pointing a rocket launcher at me. That's why it says "more like 13 and a half min later." The shot I had of me getting, well, shot, I deemed to be to bloody, so I didn't put it in.
oh... well, yeah, that probably make sense. But note that I only noticed after you said it to me, so perhaps that something to take into consideration.
Yea, this last one was kinda a hack job.
I have yet to come up with the script and stuff for the next one. I am also working one a way to broadcast my screen while i am working on the comic. If i get it to work, i will start tweeting when i work on the comic