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Ep 4: "Let the games begin"
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Mularac
Mularac

hahaha that must be a pain in the butt :P

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami

Btw, someone told me that the arrows are not needed, what do you all think?

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Mularac
Mularac

that he/she is right. Usually comics have a logical, predetermined sequence, occidental comics are read from left to right and oriental from right to left.

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami

Ok, they won't be in the next one. Also, short of flaming, feel free to say what you want, help me make it better.

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Mularac
Mularac

only one critic: Why, if Alex is obviously in a higher position than you, for the way he's aiming he's gun, the laser's coming from below?

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami

That was going to be to be after he shot me, and I re spawned, there is someone (didn't decide who) pointing a rocket launcher at me. That's why it says "more like 13 and a half min later." The shot I had of me getting, well, shot, I deemed to be to bloody, so I didn't put it in.

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Mularac
Mularac

oh... well, yeah, that probably make sense. But note that I only noticed after you said it to me, so perhaps that something to take into consideration.

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Kage.Ookami Author
Kage.Ookami

Yea, this last one was kinda a hack job.
I have yet to come up with the script and stuff for the next one. I am also working one a way to broadcast my screen while i am working on the comic. If i get it to work, i will start tweeting when i work on the comic

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Sorry about the arrows, I know they're need, but I am not good at making them. Also, I now have a Twitter, that I will post news about the comic on.

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